The Spa Pool

The Spa Pool

Green trees droop over my head just touching the tip of my hair as I soak into the deep water

Noisey kids scream as they get a face full of water,

Wood,Rubber,metal

All are getting splashed as the children splash the dog.

Angry adults yell while putting up the huge umbrella

Huge bubbles pop, the clear water flows, powerful jets push us out of the way of the deep seats.

The crazy wind blows like a big strong force trying to pull us away

The Giant pot plant wobbles,

The old white lid waiting to be put back on the spa pool.

I Way Cycling

With about 1 minute till we get to the sports park Excitement going all around the bus The teacher saying, “Stay in your seats.” Frustrated by the children We walk out of the bus in joy I stare at Lyndell and Terese I quietly sit on the concrete I slowly get a type of hat and hop on my two wheeled vehicle I Quickly ride over the two hoses I look up to Lyndell while on my way over the hose I ride back to the line in relief Stops Waits Listens Then through an awkward moment of silence Everyone starts moving again Then lyndell starts talking again and all eyes go on her The two wheeled monster Start speeding and slowing down Wobbling Leans Falls Gets up Put stand down And then And then And then Then right before the game starts Everyone says yay

Rainbow springs was usual enough

Rainbow springs was usual enough;It had Animals, a laser maze, a playground, a water slide In the middle of the lake and even a flying fox that I didn't go on. My brother, My sister and I Did what kids do went on the water slide in the lake, stared at the birds and fish walked out the Metal door, ran like cheetahs to the lizard Feeding with my hot jacket around my waist splashed in puddles,swinging on the bars Doing nothing important.

The Holidays

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Going to Rotorua

Brmm Brmm I’m on my way to Rotorua with my family. It took about two and a half hours to get there. We stayed in a hotel called Rydges.

We were on floor 3. There were 4 floors. Our floor had the gym and floor 2 had the pool. We stayed there for three nights and we had breakfast there too.

There was a pool there and we went in the pool about four times.

For the first breakfast I had pancakes. I had two and I had a hot chocolate and apple juice. It was really yummy.

The next day me and Belle went on a zorb. I thought it would be scary but it wasn’t. It was filled with hot water because it was in winter. It was warm water and in summer it was cold water. After that we got changed and we went on the gondola and the luge. We went on there twice. It took quite a long time waiting in the first line because it was longer and it was up a ramp. But the second line was really fast, it took about five

minutes. The luge made my hands go sore. On the way to get up I went on a luger taker. I went with Belle.  

The next day we went to Agroadventures. Me, Belle, Lucy and Cooper were allowed to do two things but Cooper didn't do two things he only did one. I went on a machine that you could fly on. It hurt my back because the people that work there say that you need to be like a banana and then me, Belle and mum went on a swoop. It was 150 meters high. It was really scary. After that we went to a maze called aMAZEme and you had to get to the middle of the maze where there was a pirate flag. I was the first one out of my family to get there. Belle was second. After we came out of the maze I played on the stilts that were there.

That night me, Belle, Lucy and Dad went ice skating. The skates were blue, I went round the edge a few times and Lucy and Belle had a ice puller. Lucys was red and Belles was blue they were number 4 and 10. I didn’t need one I fell over twice and banged my head. It hurt, my right leg was covered in ice it was freezing.

I got back up but then dad shouted out “Molly ten more minutes then we're leaving.” I said “Okay.” so then I tried to go in the middle of the rink. I fell, then it was time to go. We got subway and then we went back to Rydges and had a shower then went to bed.

A Moment In Time...

Lights Out

I heard the dog barking as I’m almost asleep.

I heard Cooper screaming because

he didn't want to go to bed.

I saw shadows on the roof of my mum and dad.

I saw the pillows over my face.

I felt the heavy sheet as I try to get to sleep.

I felt the pillows underneath my head.

I wonder if I will wake up early.

I wonder if my dog will jump on my legs.

By Molly                               

Stoney Creek Ranch Camp